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Hello I'm Michael and I'm 15 Years old . This is my first Flash Movie so please Don't be mean ^^ I live in Vienna and I'm thinking about making a hot flash page ... so please remember That this is my first Videos .
And it took me 3 ore 4 days at all

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it's okay better than a lot of other people's bullshit but why did u rate it teen

THIS MEANS NOTHING TO ME!

OH VIENNA!

That made no sense. Also, the art was god awful.

Okaaay...

It's alright as a first movie... Few improvements I'd like you to notice before you make your next flash:

1. Pre-loader: It's not hard to add, and it'll tell to watchers how much longer it takes so they can watch your flash. It's always good thing to add.
2. Graphics: These can be always improved, even thought they were alright in this flash.
3. Sound effects: These will make your flash more realistic, it's always good.
Note: if you add sound effects or speak, remember to adjust music so watchers can hear them.
4. Story: It's very basic thing, and not hard to add, but it's hard to make a good story...

If you note these things, your next flash will be awesome. Good luck to your next flash, And Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2008.

Credits & Info

Views
3,592
Votes
3
Score
2.17 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 25, 2007
7:43 AM EST