funny
funny, i look forward to the actual episode!
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PLEASE READ FIRST!
This is just a pilot as you can see in the name!
It's only the first scene of the first episode!
Episode 1 should be on Newgrounds next year,]
That's only a few days away, so be patient.
Read what I've written on the loading screen.
NorthAmericaProduct responds:
thnx
Just OK
Well, for 1 scene it wasn't too bad, but it wasn't all that entertaining either.
Way too much breathing into the mic. Not the intentional hissing sound, but the puffs after speaking. Move the mic away when recording.
Also, it really wasn't very funny and your idea of what a pilot is, is incorrect. A pilot actually is a whole episode. This is more like a Preview episode.
In any case, I think if the whole episode follows what you've done here it will only do ok on NG as it isn't brining anything too spectacular or funny to the table.
But, since it seems you're pretty new to animating it should still be a solid 1st series for you to practice with and have some fun with and improve as you go.
NorthAmericaProduct responds:
thanks, and i know a pilot is a first episode, i just didn't really know how to word it