This is my first movie. Sorrry for the big file size.
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The voice acting was pretty horrible, didn't sound serious.
The actual animation had some problems, such as a non-understandable plot, choppy scenes and such.
The music didn't fit in very well either. You want the music to flow with the animation, or even make the music create the animation.
This might sound a little rough, but don't take it as an offensive comment. I think you still did a great job incoprorating 3D objects into the movie.
Niccceee!!!
It's great to see someone who WAITS to submit their first flash to Newgrounds to when they're actually good at flash! I liked your movie a lot for a first movie, so It's awesome you didn't start with a crappy stick figure fight! Once again, nice work!
Thanks. This isn't acutally my first flash, but it's my first finished movie.
Cool.
Nice visuals in this one, although the darkness of some parts makes the charas. and their actions hard to see. The music was good in and of itself, but it didn't seem to fit the action somehow. Maybe I was expecting techno? Or if it HAD to be orchestral, with a more "action" feel to it? But all and all, this is a pretty good flash.
I don't think techno would fit the role in this movie. Plus, for the rest of my game, i'm using mostly Immediate Music.
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give every one difrent hair styles to make it more interesting .. but ill give this a 1 since .. i dont like pre Vs no point in posting it -.-"
This isn't a preview, noob. It's an intro to my upcoming game. It's in the beta stage.