not bad

for a first submission it was a good effort, your skills are definitely going to increase with practice so don't stop. Add some voice acting to your work to spice things up. looking forward to your future submissions.

technic

look like you put a lot work in it, but it lack technic.
Pratice more at Flash.

Not a bad attempt at all.

The up close drawings were well done. I enjoyed watching it.

Juts watch your movie size. It looks like you have your vertical set to high, and we can see where your characters have no legs!

Keep working on your sound control and keep animating!

no character developement

No one wants to watch two freshly introduced characters fight for no reason. Throw on a crappy plot, it could have made it much better. Also the animation was so choppy at some points it made it hard to watch. Its redeeming quality? I really liked the ending.

well...

sorry men but your animation no is goood : (