I Hate That.
But I love this on the other hand ;D
I don't think this is your best short story, But even your worst animations would be dominant over the best of a lot of other authors on Newgrounds. The animation was pretty smooth and well done. Especially the faded view out the back window.
Although the graphics wasn't your best work, But I guess this is a 2007 submission, And its currently 2009. So therefore with the time done, and the fact you've improved by miles, Good stuff.
Not your best work yet, But still worth watching, tenfold.
Hit the nail again.