Nice!
Hey isn't that guy who saves mario and kirby at the end cakelletta?
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Well it's finally here after three weeks of production! This is all of the fury of sandbags in one episodes. A lot of you don't know what I'm talking about so just watch the movie! Please tell me if there are glitches, lags, all of that jazz. Well, enjoy!
PRitty good
YOU probuly should of taken out the biging of part 2 (pictues of all the cariters) can't wait for the next one
Nice Start
Good! Can I just suggest not using so many default gradients. The text boxes were a bit, well I don't think they really fit in well. Maybe try find some voice actors. Well done though! I can see you actually put effort in.
i and like to it
that was pretty bad... I guess the story is okay at best, but the movement isn't that great. You also used Luigi's voice for mario so that kinda sucked. Anyways i'd put a little more work into the second episode and maybe explain the story a little better...when kirby went off to explain he didn't really say ANYTHING so those of us who don't know your story has no clue whats going on.
In short, it needs work.
mouse63 responds:
What kirby was telling mario was what you saw at the begging, when kirby was sleeping and was captured by Mata Kight. I didn't show it again because that would be pointless. Also, I never used luigi's voice for mario.....................
Noice...
I did enjoy it a bit. The giant ass text boxs were weird and the fight sequence didn't seem to have a steady flow as it seemed to skip back and forth. But that's just the bad stuff. On the the other hand the story is interesting and I highly encourage you to keep at making flash. Hard work even with sprite animation can make some hilarious videos.
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