Is that it? It needed more to it.
What you had looked alright, but there just wasn't much in it at all, the main character killed a guy, got shot at, stopped the bullet and then it just ended, you should have continued on from that, had him kill the people in the room and then have some story in it along with more action. You needed story to this as there wasn't any story at all, which it really did need to make it stand out from the rest. You also should have had sound effects in it, like when he was firing the gun and stuff, as it seemed weird without it.
Peace Out, Afro Stud