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This didn't take long to do but it was for an early uni project concerning one of the seven sins.
Guess which one I chose.


My current favorite.

It was a concept I had never thought of.
It's a riot. Limited production values aside, the concept was captured perfectly.
Awesome job!

Torm responds:

Wow, I didn't expect this kind of appraisal. Thanks very much

Pretty Funny

I like the concept, but could've probably been better if you had've expanded it.

Also you probably should've made the pool table vector as well, it kind of clashes.

The rest of the animation was good though, and you had a good song selection.

Just more of the same would've been nice.

Torm responds:

Yeah looking back I wish I would have made it as a vector but the requirements of the project had said we need to show examples of using photoshop so I tried to show the use on the table.
I may come back and improve this in future. Though I'll be submitting alot more interesting projects i'm sure. Thanks anyway though

Could be worse

That said, your skills look like they're there, they just weren't making a good showing this time around. Now, if you had a whole game of pool set up like this, that could be interesting. Beyond that, this was too short to be really entertaining.

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Torm responds:

Thanks for the comment, I know I let myself down on technical skill and I could've produced something alot better and will in future but my deadline is actually tomorrow so I was just hoping it's good enough for that.

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2.66 / 5.00

Dec 13, 2007
8:27 PM EST