Whats this!!!!!!!!!!!
Author Comments
My first submission. This is based on Charles Dicken's 'A Christmas Carol". Merry Christmas everyone!
UPDATE: I added a button to skip the intro.
an icon would really be appreciated, and i will put you in the video credits. thanks!
Oh my gosh! I just remembered I didnt give some credit!
Stage by S_Y.
Curtains by Tonberry2k.
I'm so sorry!
Meh. Just clogging my search for "A Koopa's Revenge"
That's it?
This has some potential, but needs work. There wasn't really any ending at all, almost as if you cut the story off and could be longer.
I like the idea though.
Not bad for a first flash.
I liked the text font but the text kept going too fast and i didn't get a chance to read some of it so you need to work on that but overall it was good for your first flash and i loved the song you added at the ending credits,keep on improving and good luck. :)
It had potential
But keep at it!
