Wow

When I first started watching this, I thought it was gonna be pretty rubbish. But wow, you really proved me wrong. In an odd way, it was pretty witty, and your animation was actually pretty good as well. Graphics weren't too shabby.

Only improvement I could suggest would be to display those long paragraphs at the end for a little longer. I'm a fast reader, and evenI couldn't quite finish them.

8/10