needs more
do a bit more on it since its not that great
NOTE THIS IS A DEMO PLEASE DO NOT BLAM IT IT MADE LIKE THIS SO YOU MAY TEST IT AND GIVE ME COMMENTS ON HOW TO IMPROVE.
THERE IS NO WAY PAST THE GUY IN THE HANGER,I JUST POSTED THIS TO SEE WHAT YOU WOULD WANT TO IMPROVE SINCE I JUST STARTED THIS CHAPTER
-DNATOXIC
needs more
do a bit more on it since its not that great