animation could have been better
the characters were lacking in persona, I could critique this down on why I don't like it, but I'd rather say why I do, cuz it's "matrixy" lol, good job, but next time try harder
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All right, so after some time I am releasing PAML 2, before u watch this watch the first one to get some mild understanding... the thing dosent really have a story right now but will in the future... I hope. anyways im lookin for someone to write scripts for this, so if u interested then PM me, cuz I seriously need someone to write scripts.
so anyways enjoy.
P.S. the guy is still the same person I just gave him a different hair color and hair style. thats the final version of him... right now
strange
The whole concept of the movie was strange, the animation was pretty good though. I really didn't understand the movie.
assasinrabbit responds:
well u see that is the problem for me in these movies, I need a proper script writer, if ya know anybody then plz tell pm me, id really apreciate it.
good!
It's a rookie movie, buy was fine. You put in it blur and shadows effects, and that's was nice.
Keep training in flash. See the color mixer and the gradients. Good luck.
assasinrabbit responds:
Thx :D, by each episode I get better, I think lol, anyways I hope ul check out the other episodes aswell. if you know anyone who might be interested in writing scripts for PAML then please pm me.
and again thx
Interesting...
A rabbit, of all tihngs... Pretty wierd. I like that.
assasinrabbit responds:
lol, the rabit was actualy from my earlier series called "the epic adventure" it was a cheap rip off from unforgotten realms, but anyways. yeah a rabbit. lol. If u know anyone who is interested in makin scripts for PAML plz pm me.
Nice story!
Loved it. I liked the story and it was pretty funny when he was looking at the bottle on fire. Great sound effects, ok graphics, and nice animation. Keep it up! :]
assasinrabbit responds:
YAY! my first 10/10 on a animation which I worked hard on, man thx. you have made my day so damn great. thx man! apreciate that u actualy took the time to write a review and all that stuff. btw, if u know anyone who would like to work on scripts for PAML then pm me with their name and stuff. thx again :D