hmmmm
Humor was....alright, could've had more
and the animation was quite average.
The voice acting was lacking a bit, as well.
Author Comments
Hello everyone, this is my 2nd flash submission =]
This started out as a school project for a competition, but after very little thought i decided to put it on Newgrounds for you all to see :D
This is the first adventure of Tommy Napalm!
Animation by Liam Wright
Voice Acting by Bradley Townsend
Virtual-Reverb responds:
Hah, you were clearly too nice about this.
Thank you for being constructive about this submission at least :)
I have more stuff coming which wont be as nearly as horrible as this was.
Cheers!
well...
If that was your second animation, was a good one. Try work in the humor skill, and the time give the other. Good luck.
Virtual-Reverb responds:
Cheers =] i only spent a few hours making it though, so im proud of what i did for the time amount, im making a longer TN film and hopefully a series :D
Not Bad
Think how to make this looks funny or remembering-worth
I"ll let you pass then.
Well..
It was OK.. I didn't like or dislike it. Next time find a better voiceactor and practice on your animating and drawing skills.
However, keep it up! (I gave you a protection point)
Funny
It is funny and what mark did you get for it?
Virtual-Reverb responds:
um i was away the day we were supposed to give it in so i dont know :P
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