hmmm
this was okay but next time try to do better drawings,then you'll have something!
Author Comments
This is my first try at the sexy humor & violence genre. this is my 1st try. I accidently made a loading screen, but i shouldn't have! Enjoy! Oh yah, i only spent 30 minuteas on this and its a loop.
Try harder next time
I never did any animation (really, I took flash classes but I forgot everything before starting xD) but I would look twice this before uploading it... I dunno, make it a bit slower so everyone can read what are they saying(I couldn't in the first try), or using a background.
Anyway keep practicing so you can do a better one next time ;)
Goozo responds:
Well, thanks for the honest Review, and frankly, this took me all of ten minutes in 8th grade, so I guess that suggests I have some promise if I apply myself.
XD. I will get better, and thanks!
could use work...
a lot of it, but it's pretty good for a first, drawing should be checked each frame, because it's a little loose...
I have just 1 word..........
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...NICE!!!!
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- Dec 5, 2007
- 8:38 PM EST