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the only reaosn im giving you a is tht yo have music and the animation was horrible no offense no wait offense my lizard could do better if you could do it again make it more clear and good luck next time
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The serious monsters is a brand new card game that will be as big a smash hit as yu gi oh, pokemon and all those other ghey shows that sell cheap pieces of card board to kids.
I'm gonna be rich and i will sell out hard.
RikiKazuki420 responds:
i'd like to see your lizard's little cartoon.
does your lizard happen to be named Zeckey and come from Space?
if that's the case, i know that he's better than i am, he's a rival and a plateau for me to strive for some day.
but if it's just a normal, common lizard, who happens to be able to animate in flash, i'd like to see it anyway.
i hate it when reviews make statements they can't back up. like this one time i got a review from someone saying thier little sister could do better, and i called him on it, and just a short time later, i saw that same person submit a crudely drawn, but cute and well animated flash that the author's comments said was made by his little sister. it got blammed, but i thought it was nice that he actually listened. i gave his sister's cute little flash a decent score, but it wasn't enough to pass.
but if your lizard isn't gonna make a cartoon that's better than this, then i win by default.
Drawings were good and you atleast had music
I think if you were to slow down and at least stay consistent with your drawings this could of turned out better... it was kinda funny but I couldn't understand it too much.
RikiKazuki420 responds:
well, this is just a bunch of old FLAs with the same theme tossed together.
i wrote out the rules to the card game and made a bunch of cards, they'll be put to use when i actually stop experimenting with what i can do and just make a coherent story about our spiky headed card hero entering a tournament. look forward to something that makes a bit of sense and isn't just a bunch of old crap thrown together.
Too muddled
It shows potential, but it's not readily decipherable (not really watchable)
I could guess your point, but don't feel any motivation to bother
fair drawing & animation though