pretty good!

very funny and well animated, but it's too short

Hm, I'll give you half.

This movie is good for a first, but definitely needs more work. At first it is definitely too fast paced, and you should add a play and replay button at the beginning/end (if you don't know how, go to collections, and then flash tutorials, because there are some really good tutorials there that you could learn from). But I can tell that youre animations will eventually be pretty good.

Wow

Keep up the good work. Unlike 99.9% of the rest of the people posting crap here on NG you actually seem to have some talent. I look forward to seeing your next submission

Very lol

The end is hilary, but you need improve sound and graphics.

Not bad, for a first.

You could work on getting some sounds in, maybe "The Thing" saying something about the pie. Some of the graphics are sketchy, but all in all, a nice little animation there.

Work on the loop as well. Maybe an "Again?" button instead of auto-loop.