I made this animation in a couple days and to show it to my friends i tried to put it on YouTube... but the quality was crap so I'm hoping it survives on NewGrounds so i can show them the higher quality version.
needs lots of work
First of all, don't loop it. If people want to watch it again they should have a replay button. There should be a play button at the beginning. The animation was average. And the joke is used way too much, though I must admit that it's funnier as a cartoon than someone saying the joke.
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Animation wasn't that good, and that joke is overused...
It could use...
...some background music. You should also warn your viewers about the language. Good animation, though!
Decent artwork...
Lame joke. In fact, I'm pretty sure I've already seen a Flash use this exact same joke. Come up with something original next time :/
Nothing Makes Sense.
The drawings good but. the story, the length and whatever you thought of why you did this is........ not very good.. but if you make something more "catchy" i think you could make a name for yourself.