A few thing to improve:
-More clay-less windows
-This was just tooo random, I don't even know what this was about.
-I could see your hand
-More photos->slicker animation
No offence dude, but if you submit a flash named "my first klaymation" and there is more useless windows and flash screens that the actuall claymation, then wtf?
Also, this looked like You did it in, hmmm...30-70minutes? The "explosion" looked like you dropped the camera and them freddy kruger attacked the clay figure. Try harder, It's not that hard to make a cool claymation.
But just 'cuz i feel like rising your score, I'm giving you a 4.
What starts with B and ends in m
If you found the awnser lol JK!
Nice for a start....
its good, but wen u went 2 windows then flash, it ruined it a bit. but good claymation!
the video was more about you trying to write the end in flash then the clay,
still nicely done but to short,
needs some work
not short.... it's almost 2 minutes
put this on youtube, it was good though =D i liked it
K... if you liked it, why did you vote 3/10?