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ma first klaymation

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this is my first try at clamation... at least i think...

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weak...

A few thing to improve:
-More clay-less windows
-This was just tooo random, I don't even know what this was about.
-I could see your hand
-More photos->slicker animation

No offence dude, but if you submit a flash named "my first klaymation" and there is more useless windows and flash screens that the actuall claymation, then wtf?
Also, this looked like You did it in, hmmm...30-70minutes? The "explosion" looked like you dropped the camera and them freddy kruger attacked the clay figure. Try harder, It's not that hard to make a cool claymation.
But just 'cuz i feel like rising your score, I'm giving you a 4.
Q

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What starts with B and ends in m

If you found the awnser lol JK!

Nice for a start....

bnwproductions responds:

Boom?

it's ok

its good, but wen u went 2 windows then flash, it ruined it a bit. but good claymation!

bnwproductions responds:

uhhh... thanks?

ok then

the video was more about you trying to write the end in flash then the clay,
still nicely done but to short,
needs some work

bnwproductions responds:

not short.... it's almost 2 minutes

youtube

put this on youtube, it was good though =D i liked it

bnwproductions responds:

K... if you liked it, why did you vote 3/10?

Credits & Info

Views
1,344
Votes
5
Score
2.90 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 30, 2007
3:42 AM EST