Good Animation!!!
Cute yours little charactere and i love the music and good idea
Author Comments
This toon is basically a test to see what I can do. I will release the next one with a story plot, and with voices and sound. Pardon me for the lack of effort. Please tell me what you think about it though and visit my website and possibley the forum, thanks :).
BoneOfChickan responds:
Thank you :)
nice
looking forward, it was nice.
BoneOfChickan responds:
Domo ^.^
Woo!
It looks like the start of yet another great series here at NG. :D I like the style of animation, simple and cute. Great plot as well, and lots of variation, looking forward to many more episodes to come! Keep up the great work!
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Maybe.
Voices. Get voice actors for the next one. :)
This one wasn't all that great but I'm pretty sure if you put your heart and soul into your next one you'll be able to pull it off.
Hope to see more from you.
Don't give up.
BoneOfChickan responds:
Oh yes, I agree. This episode could have been (ALOT) better, I'll force all of my time into it next time.
Never give up :)
no story
the sound was really annoying and there was no story at all. idk if you are trying to use this flash to setup the characters but you just need to work on the story a lot. PS get voice actors