heh
It made me chuckle...fruit loops was best. Needs some work though
Author Comments
This is my first flash I have ever fully completed. It's really short though. Tell me what you think. Oh and at the end with the long pauses, sorry about that.
potential
i think that this cartoon has potential. i could see it becoming a sereis if it had a decent story line, or just comedy. they could do comentary on movies or be some sort of entertainment news anchors. i would anxiously wait for the next episode. not bad for a first time.
Meh - but it interested me
Not the best of movies, but for the first fully completed movie... good job. I like the voice acting and the realism the characters express in their odd situation. I hope to see improvement on the story(I understand there isn't any lol) and comedy. I enjoy repetition in spontaneous comedy however to be deemed a worthy submission I believe improvements are required. I liked it though... 5/10.
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3.32 / 5.00
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- Nov 25, 2007
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