get there!

Great first flash! Carry on working and step up the quality. Slowly but surely you'll be good!

here's an idea

same format make it the hole screen one track( zig zag maybe), and make it a fighting race(at least three guys)..

Fluid, smooth

But lacking in general.

Clearly you have talent though, use it to make something with a plot, something bigger and something more interesting, I'm sure you can.
=)

not bad for a first

I 5'd it to help it along. Very fluid motion and decent sound effects.

It was okay.

Pretty small though. You might want to try to make it longer.