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Talking Block

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my first movie/short with voices! VOTE 5! :D

EDITED 3/3 08:
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Nope.

As mouse63 said, shape tweens DON'T mix with sprites!

review

Nice.I gave it a five;D

haha

nice short. mario got shit scared

funny XD

that was funny!

prut97 responds:

thank you. im not sure but was it you who got it from 3.00 to 3.01? if it was thank you.

Good for a first try.

I think this is good but it still needs work. I only recomend this but, shape tweens and sprites don't mix. I liked the mouths of the blocks. They moved very smoothly. I'm glad it wasn't one of those movies that had a helium voice but no background sounds. I also think you should work more on the storyline. So the blocks bascicly are angry at mario for always hiting them so they attack him. See that? You should stretch it out and fill that gap of empty space. On newgrounds, a good movie is something with background music, foley, good graphics(But it's okay for sprites) storyline, and hard work. I can't honestly say that you didn't work hard on this but I think it's safe to say that you have 2/4 of those things, not including graphics. I hoped this helped and I hope to see more of your movies in the future.

From,

Mouse63

prut97 responds:

Thank you! and very helpful.

Credits & Info

Views
4,481
Faves:
4
Votes
9
Score
3.67 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 22, 2007
11:13 AM EST