Kee Yong:
Kee Yong:
To expand the story, put in either Aqui, Cyril or that last one (Malthithingy).....
make the dot-guy fight it.
Author Comments
Not much to say here. It's a simple, experimental short created when I was bored, and features a surreal main character - a grey dot with eyes. Not really expected to pass the highly critical Newgrounders, such as you, but hey. Remember, watch the whole animation before you vote, or don't vote at all. On that note, VOTE 5 LULZ ^^
Not bad!
Your drawings were simple, but good. The idea was good as well.
It was well animated, but pretty short. Looping it was cool, but I think your character is/could be cool enough for you to make a longer animation about him.
chinkeeyong responds:
Hmmm. That's the first review to suggest expanding on my dot character; I might make a game about him in the desaturated world, maybe? Thanks for the review!
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that was different
chinkeeyong responds:
Ooookay...
a good little piece
I liked it. Hurting on length, but it IS experimental. I guess we'll give you a little leeway. The perspective change was great and was very smooth.
I love the gun dropping from nowhere. Feels like many games and their 'gifts' from the unknown.
Good job!
chinkeeyong responds:
Hooray, more good ratings! In many ways, the gun dropping was inspired by games too.
cool nice work! XD
well done this is a good example of a good opening of a flash!
the background was great
but i preferd it before the tree set on fire and changed the backround!
apart from that the movie was good.
all you need to do now is make it longer.
chinkeeyong responds:
Sure. I just need to think of a way to continue the story now...