short, sweet and to the damn point.

actually quite nice. it was simple, yet somehow refined.

Hm,.....

I don't know what to say about this, to be honest with you.. Perhaps this is derived from a past expierence? Again, I will give you points for style, and creativity and effort into the submission. My advice is to maybe add some more color to it, but other then that you have quite a good submission. My advice if you want a better score, is a better message, to describe this submission. Nonetheless it's a good submission. Deserves a three in my book.

S'alright.

I give you props for art-work. However I wasn't truely interested with the story, mainly because all my reviews are based on pure instict. Nah I'm messing with you, I just didn't like this all that much, but, for quality and creativity, I'll give you a pretty good score. Keep it up...

Good job!

This is a 4/5 and a 8/10. Good job!

wow

i thought that was really cool!! it flowed really nice ^__^ gj... XDD