I'm sorry, but the sheer quality of the submission, combined with the stupid if not unprovoking storyline really dosen't cut it in my eyes. I'm willing to look over the poor quality of the graphics, but the storyline alone is just terrible. Next time ask yourself "Is this story thought provoking, does it make people want to watch my submission?" Nonetheless that's really the only thing that I find to be wrong with the submission. But even though it is the only thing, it's a major thing that needs fixing. Poor submission.