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i aplase this vid with my dark soul
Author Comments
This Movie is about my friend named Alexandra, turning into an Emo... just a school project.
I also liked to say that i don't have ANYTHING against emo, or that you have to be an emo to ut yoursel or somthing ;)
Enjoy :P
AND! I FORGOT!!
SLUT means THE END on swedish!
i did not mean slut as a slut.. i mean THE END ;)
Not bad.
I thought it was very good for your first flash.
well ill tell ya this. The whole emo scene is old
Im sure you know what obvious flaws there are so i wont rub your face in it.
while there was moderate thought into this its too little too late.
What i mean is the emo make fun of scene is old now. Sure theyre still annoying but get with the times thats all.
Now as for real criticism the artwork was ridiculously sketchy, not sure if that was the point.
I see some techniques used like the letter reading animation. BUT it was kinda ruined by the over sketchy art.
As a tip, out line smooth lines in black or really dark colours. REALLY dark.
anyhow dont give up good luck next time
D-noob responds:
I am wery happy for your comment ;)
but it's like this, it's not a joke:
I had an task in my Multimedia course to do a first try flash movie about an emo girl.
So i had no choice but to do a flash movie about an emo girl...of ya know what i mean..
and this took me 2 weeks... got A+
My next project is going to be a LOT of better!
You will see what it is, and i even got an half a year to finish it
thanx for the comment ;)
Um...
What does "slut" have to do with anything? The animation wasn't good mostly because she shook more than she would have, and that her overall hand motions were bad.
But worse than that is the sound. It's either way too loud, doesn't fit with the animation, is extremly annoying, or you can't tell WTF it's supposed to be.
Not bad for a first attempt.
All things considered, it wasn't that bad. The animation was smooth, that's for sure. But next time, try working on character designs a little more, a little background music wouldn't hurt and try to make a Flash that's a little longer. I think you're off to a good start, though.
P.S. - You can obviously speak English, so why did you decide to use the Swedish term "Slut", as opposed to simply "The End"? You had to know that there would be some confusion over it, right?
D-noob responds:
You are right, but i wasn't suppose to put this movie up in newgrounds... i was just going to show it to my friend Alexandra this movie on the internet... so i need to put it up somewhere.
and she is swedish... so that is why i wrote slut... she aint a slut! i promise!