heres a reveiw:

Subject Grade Rating effect Total score
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Graphics Beautiful +3 points 3 Points
Choppy? A Little Bit -1 point 2 points
Sound bugs: A lot - 2 points 0 points
Animation bugs: None + 0 points 0 points
Fit for a flash movie: With A Few Fixes + 1 point 1 point
Overall Score: 1 point

Note: I think the reason you have so many bugs and choppyniss is because you
get mixed up with all the layers, sounds, and such. Don't worry, Im sure all
major flash animators get mixed up while doing their prime animation.