good
i think its good, but you need to improve the problem with the sound. its not very good to hear this, so better put subtitle. or something, or try making the recordings again. other than that.... its good, i liked this, man. very cool!
Author Comments
Dont sue wind-up! Lie's are bad. Don't do drugs. The sounds area bit off. I like pie. Wind-Up is cool. Thats all.
maja14 responds:
Thank you. I'll keep that in mind next time.
Honesty
Some of the vocals are unclear and the animation is a little shaky at times. But shows potential and some humor. But it does need improvement. Everyone needs practice at first. Maybe try to refine pieces before submiting them.
maja14 responds:
The animation derailed once I put it up on newgrounds. Thanks for the C+C.
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- Nov 17, 2007
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