Alrighty

It was alright; it kept my attention span happy.
I would definitely improve on graphics, though.
Another thing, I really wish you hadn't used Zelda music, but maybe that's just me.

'twas alright.

the story was ok from the parts i could understand. is it based on steinbeck's novel? i've never read it so i wouldn't know. the graphics were nothing special though. and couldn't you have used something besides zelda music? maybe that's just nitpicking, but still.

Ha! XD

That was great!! XD

lolzerz

funny. at least i thought it was (don't know if that was intentional on your part). i don't know if ALL the Zelda music really played its part though...