I'd say...

While the "story" is all right (you found a way to tell people about your life, motivations, etc) I think you should work a lot on the animation and design... So I'm not giving a bad mark as I thought in the beginning... I just hope if you want to go on with this you will work on the flaws that were pointed out.

not great

very strange i had no idea what was going on. try working on the animation and uhhh story.

Pretty cool.

Kinda baring your soul there. You explain the things you need to keep yourself healthy and happy. And, as a previous choir singer, I know how you feel about music. Rock on, dude. I'll give it a 5.

uhhh.

The concept was good but the graphics and music was bad,other than that I recomend better graphics and different sound track.