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Well this is my first animation so don't expect allot. I did the best I could do with my animation skills. This flash has sound and music so it's not all that bad... It took me 1 1/2 days to make it. It would have been longer but it would have taken me about 2 more days.


Anyways, any reviews on what I could do to improve are greatly appreciated. I respond to all.


Note: I just noticed the pre-loader stopped working... I'm working out what the problem was and when it's fixed, I'll add the pre-loader version.


UPDATE: I just added a newer version of the flash. I think the preloader is now fixed I think it was just a layer problem.

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Terrible

The animation was very poor; extremely choppy, and the stick figures didn't even look like they were moving. The graphics were terrible too, being nothing more than a few lines and fills thrown poorly together.

The first major error is that the stick figures should be drawn with the paint brush tool so you can make it smoother and draw easier. Next, it doesn't look like you even used the Onion Skin tool. If you turn it on, you can see what was on the previous frame to make the animation smoother.

The background lacked everything; lighting, realism, and talent altogether. You may as well have left it out it was so bad.

The sound effects were chosen well, although the music was not. I'll give you 2 stars for the effort.

Some things good and bad

I saw your remake, but for my opinion, everything was a bit more actiony and fast paced in this one.

The sound effects were better in this one also, but explosions are kinda weird. Like when the tank blows up, it looks like it bled.

But I can't just give you a low rating because of your drawing skills!

Afar from the flaws, this flash actually kept me interested, unlike other first time flashes, I close them(lol).

Hang in there and keep on trying!

Phantox responds:

Thanks. I'll see if I add more action on the next one I make then.

Thanks again

heh screw tha bad guys

Phantox your awesome... i saw your remake but i did get mad at seeing one thing on there... the shakyness of the camera... was gone in the remake T_T boo hoo xD

W/E you still have the numero uno hentai games and galleries on NG

Phantox responds:

Well the shakiness was caused because I copy/pasted the background into every frame instead of making it at the beginning. Didn't know people would actually like it

ahuh . . . . i see?

that was so cool, well not really, i can do better then that in an hour, yep. that just seemed like u didnt try at all, i can relate to you not being a good drawer, some people just cant controll that mouse, but seriously, the animation its self, not the graphics, the animation the movement was shocking, no shit its fbf, but yeah i say just muck around on flash, have some practice, like if i wanna learn somthing, i sit there on flash just repeating and repeating till im happy with it.

Phantox responds:

Yeah my animation and stuff on this one suck but my third movie is a lot better than the first 2

hey um

nice attempt however this is crap compared to what you can make now right?

Phantox responds:

Yeah I guess

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Uploaded
Nov 12, 2007
6:42 PM EST
Genre
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