Potential is there
You definitely have potential. :-) Only thing I would suggest at this point is to go with more shapes, you've got way too many circles and lines in this one - any other shape is fine in addition to circles & lines, but if you could forsake the plain circles & lines completely, I think you'd make some really rockin' shorts. Good luck, & welcome to the wonderful world of flash creation! :-)
Thank you for your opinion. I really appreciate it. I know that it got really repetitive with the shapes, but I'm trying to figure out different ways of making the same shapes and symbols over and over again besides using the library. Right now, I'm working on two shorts that are going to be put together into one flash. It's going to look way more advanced than this one (a huge portion of that is because I will be using a higher fps) and I'm hoping that I don't fall on my face with it. Thank you once again. It's really helpful!
The lack of plot did not matter at all for me. It was entertaining enough for my taste. Well done
For your first ever experiment in flash that was excellent. Very fluid. I can't wait to see what you'll be able to do when after some practise.
It was pretty nice. It looks like it took a fair amount of time to make, and there was effort involved. I like that music and I think it was a nice choice for this flash and fits perfectly.
Most of it was rather bland, it needs more color. The actual drawings and stuff are pretty much just basic shapes and lines. All in all it was good, though.
For a first entry...
... this isn't bad. You seem to have the makings for a good Flash artist. I think all you need to do is put a little more time into figuring out all the little quirks of Flash and with each animation, you'll definitely get better. This was a good start, in any case, but that's all it really is: a start. Keep at it and I think you'll soon be putting out great material.