i guess

i am guessing u have not made many videos... like those 2 people said the animation is sort of jerky and the graphics arent great. take time drawing..dont rush it. i think if you put some more time and keep practicing you could turn out to be good video/game creator

Well...

Work on your graphics and you will be much better. Most of the time, the reason why movies have low quality graphics is because the authors do not care. Put some quality time on drawing will have you improved significantly.

uh.......

strange sort of cartoon that i have seen
it needs improvements
the movementrs are jerky
needs preloader

keep working on it and it'll be better...... hopefully

Okay...

I really liked the song at the end; that hallelluyah (or whatever) with Metal; tell me, where can I get that song?

Yo yo

Thnx for takin my idea( not in a bad way), you animated it well, beat the first one. :D