you realy need to improve your sprites and music needs to be added and your gunshot sounds like a pistol not a sniper rife your lucky this is your first flash or else the flash would not pass judgement also you should make your buttons look llike buttons
Could be better.
I'll give you a 7 since this is your first flash game. A few problems though. A few of the target would appear and then vanish very quickly around .25 seconds. Hardly long enough to even get to the target. I have an IR mouse which atleast allows for speed and accuracy, however if the targets vanish so quickly, it's quite difficult to get it. I got about 21,385, give or take before I chose to end it. Still, other then that complaint, this is one of the best first entries I have seen in quite some time.
Needs some work
First off a bar that showed reload time might be cool. You could improve the graphics. At one point I shot a guy and he stayed on the screen for a long time and no new guys appeared. You might want to increase the pace of the game and have the time to shot be alot shorter. I looks like it has potential
Not so good nor bad
It is OOOOk. If I were your teacher i would put you 13/20. Cause it has bad graphics. Bad preloader. Even i've voted a 2 to stay here in newgrounds you should improve it.
The main problem is that it is too hard to get out of the negative points. Maybe you could fix the amount of points you lose and get from shooting the target.