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Little Bird

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Two birds chit chat about what will happen to this one fat bird. You know those bird feeders, that when a squirrel crawls on them the squirrel goes flying off? Well have you ever wondered what would happen to a really fat bird? Two birds wonder this too.

This is NOT meant to offend anyone out there, it's just meant for a quick laugh.

A short film by Tristan Beckley (Greth-of-Choas).

If you see any problems/mistakes PLEASE tell me.

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You're getting better Tristan!

I remember when you first submitted Moneybags, it was alright, but the animation and graphics needed some tweaking. You've gotten much better at Flash, and this movie proves it. I could only suggest less motion tweening. All in all, great movie!

Nice job,
-GOD

Greth-of-choas responds:

Ah thank you very much. And yes :') I think I have gotten better :). My next movie though, there is going to be A LOT of frame by frame animation so this takes out the "tweening". I guess I can post a demo of it on newgrounds. Check it out!

Hey! This was alright!

This had great graphics! But the joke was hard to get. I had to watch it 6-7 times to get it....Maybe you should slow the movie down a little bit?

Hmmm, interesting

animation was ok...on some parts. but really I didn't get it. Maybe if you could have been more illustrative with the birds speech bubbles or shown them for a bit longer? Plus a little more sound effects would have been nice other then the 2 chirping sounds used over and over again.

Greth-of-choas responds:

Alright...I will try that...

I don't get it

Im sorry, If my sense of humour is off a bit but I dont get the joke. I found the grass graphic to be annoying, but other than that it was, Ok. Keep up the good work and may I suggest watching some comedy silent movies, You may pick up a few pointers about pace and timing. I know it was suppose to be a short, but perhapse it was too quick.

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Nov 5, 2007
11:26 PM EST
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