Two birds chit chat about what will happen to this one fat bird. You know those bird feeders, that when a squirrel crawls on them the squirrel goes flying off? Well have you ever wondered what would happen to a really fat bird? Two birds wonder this too.
This is NOT meant to offend anyone out there, it's just meant for a quick laugh.
A short film by Tristan Beckley (Greth-of-Choas).
If you see any problems/mistakes PLEASE tell me.
You're getting better Tristan!
I remember when you first submitted Moneybags, it was alright, but the animation and graphics needed some tweaking. You've gotten much better at Flash, and this movie proves it. I could only suggest less motion tweening. All in all, great movie!
Nice job,
-GOD
Ah thank you very much. And yes :') I think I have gotten better :). My next movie though, there is going to be A LOT of frame by frame animation so this takes out the "tweening". I guess I can post a demo of it on newgrounds. Check it out!
Hey! This was alright!
This had great graphics! But the joke was hard to get. I had to watch it 6-7 times to get it....Maybe you should slow the movie down a little bit?
Hmmm, interesting
animation was ok...on some parts. but really I didn't get it. Maybe if you could have been more illustrative with the birds speech bubbles or shown them for a bit longer? Plus a little more sound effects would have been nice other then the 2 chirping sounds used over and over again.
Alright...I will try that...
I don't get it
Im sorry, If my sense of humour is off a bit but I dont get the joke. I found the grass graphic to be annoying, but other than that it was, Ok. Keep up the good work and may I suggest watching some comedy silent movies, You may pick up a few pointers about pace and timing. I know it was suppose to be a short, but perhapse it was too quick.
