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this is my second game i made with flash
i made this game very very simple so any 1 can play it
if this doesnt get blammed i will make more levels
also comment please so i know what i can improve


WHEN U CLICK THE GO BUTTON CLICK THE SIDE OF IT


ENJOY


REMAKING THE GAME THANKS FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS I WILL TRY IMPROVE IT FROM WHAT YOU HAVE SAID

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um...?

good for ur first game but i'm sure you could do a lil bit better! it is origanal so i'm giving it a 4 :)

happy flashing :)

Not bad

NIce for a first flash game

This is a good original idea but has alot of bugs that need to fixed such as the go button and no limit on how much you can draw, you could have asked a friend who lives close to give you some advice.

jaythorpe responds:

lol rob u live next door to me you dont know nothing about scripting

Nice...

It's a nice original idea, I hope. In my opinion, you did not work on it enough. You could do a nice background, fix the go button, make a nice menu when they first enter. You have a lot to fix.

jaythorpe responds:

yeah i am remaking another 1 today hopefully should be finished sunday or monday

Uh what the hell?

For me I couldn't even get the button "Go" to even work.

On saying that I do think the idea of drawing the line for him to jump on is the strongest point of this game. Weak graphics,but seeing as it's more of a birds eye view it can be accepted. Music doesn't really suit it. Background is dull,it needs life.

You need to do more than add levels, you need to give it some life. A game needs more than simplicity or good gameplay,it needs a wow factor. I know it isn't easy but you really need to re-develop this.

A good way to do this is to write what the game is about on a piece of paper,tape it to your monitor. Then when your adding things to it, make sure it fits the brief you wrote about the game. That way you are sure for it to be what you intended it to be.

Disregard this if you want, but otherwise this game can't survive on simplicity.

jaythorpe responds:

it does work the go button is bit dodgy as u need click the edge of it

nice game

I actually enjoyed it. Good idea, only problem is that its very easy. You should limit the drawing somehow to make it more challenging. Since now you can draw as much as you want, its very easy.
Good job with the game.

jaythorpe responds:

thanks

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Score
2.58 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 3, 2007
2:16 PM EDT