Naturo Ball Z reprise: the torment of it

Hum... well, if you are into that kind of thing, I guess this is... mediocre. If you're not, you'll just hate it. Let's imagine, we're all into it, so... why mediocre? Well, substitlesare almost imposible to read. you mix sounds effects (people chattering) and no voices. Also, and more important, the pace is all wrong. it's too fast. Not the bitrate, but the pace of the story. Youtry to move up too fast to get to the action, and that makes the action random. You have to build up tension, so the fight has a meaning. Otherwise, it's just stick figures, but with better graphics.

And... better transitions wouldn't hurt it either. You have potential, if you learn to pace it correctly, and, either give up on effects like those horrendous claps and that chattering (and the keyboard), and play it just with a good soundtrack, or get some voice actors.

Anyway, you have potential. Your worst point is, I'll repeat, pacing. TOO fast. Destroys the story.

I STOPPED LOOKING

Not badly made or anything but, the fact that there where no voice actors bumpd me out. And the replacement of no voice actors,,,,,, that sound>>>TERRIBLE.

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this is naruto ball z lol

It was good.

But it needs a white (or colored) box behind the subtitles. When they were over a dark area, the words were not readable. Otherwise, great. :)

pretty cool

Wow this is pretty good, The scene and action part is done well, You probably alreayd know this but u need some audio voice in and it would just be an awesome Anime flash.