Meh...
Pretty good up until the cat mauling.
Then you got kinda lazy with the animating?
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This is the fist animation I did ... yay !!
The characters are not mine but I made up the story and are quite amazed to see that it actually looks ok and the best part I think is the end what do you guys think?? =D
Neways hope you like it !! =D
good but....
...it needs a preloader it get stuck in some parts.
coolo (2 o's means u)
good. It is fun. try putting a preloader. Its actually acceptable. You need to define the point better
Little choppy
The movement of the Lion and cat are a bit choppy. But it is a okay flash for the first one you've made. Passable.
for ur first time in flash good job
it was a good idea but ya ive seen the characters before. is good but try to make it so it dosnt look like slides, just one full smooth flash. hoping to see ur second one