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The Burgaler's Warning

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A boy comes home with a full bladder and no place to pee! This nail-biting minute-long short follows this poor child's epic quest to release his urine. Enjoy!! Lol

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Suprising

was not expecting the end.

Keep the suprises coming

Good Job!

demoninabottle responds:

Thanks man!

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I would say it was kind of funny. Very farfetched, but I guess it was pretty funny. Voice overs were pretty good, and I liked the music as well. It went well with this.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really didn't like the animations. I thought they were a bit primitive and were really repetitive, especially between each note, where it looked like you used the same animation over and over.

demoninabottle responds:

yeeah...I was kind of lazy but I just wanted to get the joke across

Okay

The story and humour here is probably the best part about this though it does seem a little odd and maybe draged on in parts, still not too bad to listen to, the voice acting is pretty good and clear also the sounds and music fit in to, so good choice with that.

The graphics and animation here could be improved a lot, the grey lines although do show an outline do kind of make the image look worse and viewing the person from the back when talking all the time looks a little lazy, some basic lip movements would add diversity in parts, not saying you can't view from the back but maybe not for all the time. Also, the notes came from above but there is no window, inconsistant, lol.

Keep working at it though, the story isn't too bad, just the graphics, but practice is all you really need :)

2/5

<3

= Review Request Club =

demoninabottle responds:

thanks bro

This is good

Except why was his penis so dried out!

demoninabottle responds:

his penis wasn't dried out, per se, it was just oddly shaped. I just wanted the whole animation to be fucking weird...even the part about his penis

Alright

How ironic, I saw this yesterday after I realized I used the same song in my animation.

-Good-
I thought the graphics and animation were pretty good. I thought that you drew the tree and bush well, but the roof of the house was wierd and distorded. I thought the pissing animation was funny and well done.

-Bad-
The robbers didn't seem to have very good grammer and spelling. I also disliked the font you used throughout the movie, I thought it looked strange.

-Overall-
An alright movie, was good but could have used some fixing up in places.

~Review Request Club~

demoninabottle responds:

thanks for the advice

Credits & Info

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3,751
Votes
9
Score
3.04 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 31, 2007
6:21 PM EDT