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A story about...well watch it, This is a short movie that i made in 3 days, it was fun to make but, it was a first movie that i made that i actually will submit. I hope you like it,

Please dont blam. =[

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A nice first shot...

If indeed this is your first shot into a movie you did great, I thought it was pretty good, if a little choppy in the animation style. The Stick fighting was ok, I did like that you outlined your sticks with color. This let us know which stick was the "hero" maybe. It wasn't extraordinary, but it also wasn't crap. So this was ok... Thank you for your effort.

Dude Nice!!!!

Love it

There were some problems but...

there were some obvious tweening problems but it was pretty good for a first flash movie, my advice, spend more time making your movies and smooth out all of the bugs first.

Healthy responds:

Tweening? Oh with camera.. hehe
Well this is al for the reviews I cant belive it hasent been balmmed yet! lolz Thank you for telling me.

Not to bad

Its ok for a short stick fight and good for a first submission.
Good luck with flash!

Not Bad

Nice music. Your animation shows promise. Keep at it and you'll get better before you know it. It was pretty fluid too. 7 outta ten.

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3.20 / 5.00

Oct 31, 2007
5:51 PM EDT
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