Sweet Cartoon!

There is a lot of charm in your character.
The action is a bit muddled though.
I don't always know what you're trying to say or show.
But yeah, good effort, keep it up.

Very good

I really liked this movie, a background would have made it better in my opinion.
Another thing I liked is the music, quite catchy.

Good, but needed work on sound...

Yeah, it was good and funny... but I think the sound needed some work.
Still, though...
It was good for a first.

Keep working. :)