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Pretty funny.... plastic sword :P. The art could be a little better but i cant say anything cause I dont have any of my work on ng to prove I know anything about flash. Keep going though!
Author Comments
Hamination: Halloween!
I am putting an alternative verison of this animation up at my deviantart. Click on my webpage in my profile to see it.
Ham goes trick or treating, but gets chased by an evil demon after she does something horrible. How will Ham get out of this one? Find out in another EPIC ADVENTURE OF HAMINATION!
Please turn your volume up! I hope you enjoy my movie. This is for the Halloween 2007 contest!
If you feel like giving it a bad score still please leave a review. Just lowering my score doesn't help me improve my flash skills.
stormoftara responds:
Thanks for the review. I'll try harder in the future. I can't go back and fix this one now because I accidently saved over it T_T
yay
it was but not brilliant the animationwas ok but it had my song in it so bonus points for you. the only thing you still need to work on is your animating.
stormoftara responds:
Sometimes I think people expect too much from me. Considering the short amount of time I've been animating and the lack of any formal training I think I'm doing pretty good. Each one gets better than the last as I learn more things and try new things. Sure I still use a lot of tweens, but nearly everyone does that. I think the main problem is that it's hard to animate a ham and make it look realistic. {Or a rubber duck or donut for that matter}. I have at least two more haminations planned out and in those I'll atttempt to do more frame by frame and I'll redrawn all the characters in a better way. But for now I'm going back to my main animation I've been working on, a spoof of Bleach and Death Note. Wow I write long responces....
The voices.....
I hate the voices.... The duck and the clock crew guy. Anyways you need to work on the graphics and animations they werent that great. the sound was horrible just because of the voices. I liked the plot for once you were off to a good start there. But the fact you even added a one of the clock crew members your score suffered severely. I would suggest you do you own thing and break away from the whole crew deal. Your work would be much better.
stormoftara responds:
I don't have a microphone....-_-
Therefore it's either Speakonia or nothing.
I only put a clock crew character in there to be funny. And to kill him. Lol. I can't believe this got a worse score than something I didn't even try on. I worked on this for weeks. A little disappointed about that.
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3.00 / 5.00
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- Oct 27, 2007
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- Genre
- Comedy - Original
