(title in work)

Well this had a certain amount of charm to it. It wasn't very well made graphically, but the storyline was decent. The stick fight was kind of funny, even though it was terribly animated. I think the music was a bit overboard for this. It was too loud and distracting while watching a movie.

Huh?

I really didn't get the point to this whole flash... Maybe that was because the song was too loud to hear the voice acting?

pretty good but

Pretty good but it definently needs better (voice) audio work

Hey!

It's a nice idea for a flash.
Good thing you had the scene selection buttons cuz I missed some of it.

Not bad

Solid effort! The guitar solo was especially clever. I would recommend slowing the animation in the very beginning as I can't read the captions quick enough. Also, the vocal track is very tin-ny and maybe too loud (relative to the rest of the music). I look forward to seeing it when complete!