sorry

its was ok but the flashing bavkgrounds was a bit annoying but i see u do have some animating tallent somewere inside ur head uve just got to find ur style and the style isnt urs sorry

was an ok concept.

be careful using .gifs and such too much because they will increase the file size dramatically more then if u were to animate them.

weeeeelll...

one, don't submit incomplete stuff to the portal. it probably won't stay. second, don't act all apologetic and say it's your first animation, that actually only increases the chances it'll get blammed.

the main problem i noticed is the background. it sort of flicked in and out like you forgot to put it in all the frames or something. also, it was pretty boring to watch. i was about to x it out but then it was over. the drawing and animation weren't bad (definitely good for a first animation) so submit something that's actually finished with those other things in mind and you'll do alright.

well done

but when you submite things try finshing them 1st you will get more votes

Work in Progress

It was good for a first animation...

Not sure what to tell you though.... I think i get the gist of it.. shes mad at how slow it goes so she destroys the computer...

maybe you should add a bit of a her freaking out and bashing the computer to bits to the end.. would be humors.. plus who cant relate to that ;)