Huh

I think for a first flash, this is pretty good. A little surreal. Not sure if the fantasy elements were necessary to carry your message - it seemed to be just fantasy for the sake of fantasy, but I guess that's okay. You're experimenting and that's fine. It came out pretty good.

Neatto :b

Pretty decent grapichs for your first flash. To bad with the sound thoug . . . nice concept for the movie dude ! just keep making more you know (;

I'm a sheep -DS-

Interesting

Story confused me a bit

Make it a bit clearer or simpler maybe? lol

But then again ... what do I know

The animation was smooth and looked pretty good

A little work and this will be great

You've got a good concept here, but the submission needs work. I know a lot of people just make something and then say to hell with it when they finish and submit, but you've really got potential here. I hope you'll reinvest time in it. Some things you can do to really help -- add a gloomy music track through at least the first half (until she gets to the forest, perhaps), then switch it over to something a little more forest-like; add sound effects for all events (you had them for doors closing, but not for the cage hitting the ground); clean up the animation a little bit (the human girl was walking, but the elf girl hobbled out of the cave like she was someone in the first season of south park before they could animate legs movements); and consider maybe putting a status bar on the top or bottom of the screen to signify what all the +1s mean (it would also give more weight to the idea of being controlled by numbers). Do these things, you've got frontpage gold, man.

The germ of an interesting idea

This is the most remarkable feature of your movie. I really suggest you to keep working on flash and try the same idea again, when you have more experience and you can develop your quest for self-knowledge ideas better. I´ll be looking forward to it.