The film was o.k but could have been better.
Yes, it could have done better but i don't think 3/10 is an appropriate score for "O.K.".
ino you probley tried really hard to make, but its sloppy and kinda hard to understand NICE EFFORT
Turn your speakers up if it's hard to understand.
Clay animation is never "sloppy" it is either "choppy" or "smooth".