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McSucky's - Pilot

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Three months of drawing, recording, and editing brings you this: the pilot episode of McSucky's.


I want to thank everyone who was involved in putting this together, all of our hard work has finally paid off. We hope that you are entertained by our movie, and that you will want to see more, so send us an e-mail or just leave your comments.


Next episode: McSucky's - Ep. 1 "Labor Day"

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The rape joke was a little dated haha, but the rest is pretty on-the-nose 2007 perfect. I like it.

It's awsome

Josh, i am looking forward to making another episode, it turned out really well.

Has Promise...

Okay, pretty good overall, but a couple of touchups and changes will probably help your future submissions.
1)Keep the pacing a little faster. The scenes in the car when they're toking up got pretty boring just because their was way too much time between most lines. Also a different angle/view other than the back of the car would make it more interesting.
2)The art is okay, but a little more motion besides speaking and blinking really add a lot to any video.
3)Try to stay away from directly ripping off another food service movie's jokes. The Silence of the Lambs bit would have been funnier if I hadn't already seen a better version somewhere else.

All in all, pretty good, looking forward to your next one.

Ok, I guess

Very Clerks-ish, and some parts seem almost directly ripped off of Clerks 2. The original parts are pretty good though, so I wouldn't give up on it. Way too long though. It was all I could do to finish the damn thing.

Not too shabby.

The animation needs a bit of work, but the dialogue was pretty funny. Keep it up, eh.

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Oct 22, 2007
6:24 PM EDT