ROAR! once again...
nice jas, ek laaaikit.... randomness talk = cooolNESS
nice!
Author Comments
This is my very first Flash animation short story which I've done for a class project.
Not Bad
The story was good. A few suggestions for improvement are, when you add subtitles to the speech, it would be good to put exactly what the voice was saying. I noticed it left out wording. Also, if you had the time to work on the art, it would enhance the story.
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3.00 / 5.00
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- Oct 22, 2007
- 10:55 AM EDT