i didnt even get through the whole thing..

im sorry, i can deal with a bit of randomness, but this was retarded

Random

I don't hate it or anything but next time make a flash that isn't random.

I don't understand

I may understand what's going on in this flash but it was well animated.

Not good

I recognize that this is your first submission, but I must say that this did not turn out well. I like the concept of themed characters trying to make up jokes about the aforementioned theme, but this submission's flaws outweigh its pros. For one, the lack of good dialogue and music makes the mood awkward and boring. The randomness of some clips adds to the awkwardness, along with some subtle sexual references (i.e. the heart symbol "poking" the club symbol).

However, the design of this submission seems to be a possible saving grace; emphasis on "possible". All in all, I do not expect this to make it past the Portal; however, I could not find it in me to vote a "1" on this film. So I voted "2".

ah...

you should stay but go with something different