try harder
there is a lot of stuf you can improve but stil its not so bad
HEy this is my first flash and it took me over six hours long and stuff i just want it herelong enough for my friends to see it soo yeah its about sassy ninjas and crap and horseface getting shanked by a javilin.
leave some comments about fixing mymovies in the future soo yeah and if you dont like it check my page i post my friends anime pictures and rant about stuff like school and junk like that... for the hippos
try harder
there is a lot of stuf you can improve but stil its not so bad
Alot you can improve
Hmm... I don't know where to start exactly.
I didn't feel any kind of good context, try picking a story or something like...
- Introduction - Normal day - Problem Emerges - Attempt to solve - Solved
Audio handling and picking out a track that works with your animation and if the animation gets longer than the sound track, it would be fitting to choose a track that both works with the animation and is loop friendly.
Remember, sometimes quality doesn't have to mean popularity. Even stick figures can make it to the frontpage if they've got a funny point or reach out to the right audience, though I suppose they'd have to be flowing also in the animation itself, not looking different from time to time or you can't see what they do. But ofcourse, as an artist you'd want to constantly improve your graphics materials, getting more advanced, though it takes time and practice.
Adding voices is usually a good way to create a good atmosphere, if you have voice actors or you're voice acting yourself while having fun pitching it and such.
I hope this review was useful to you ^_^
erm...
its odd...
gave me a chuckle here and there, but its just too damn random.
props on your first animation tho.
Weelllll....
Its random, and somewhat funny, so ill give you a four... Good start for your irst animation though
OMFG!!
Dude that song was great!
And the story....it was toching... ;(
5/5+10/10
i love you